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diff --git a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
index 13b782696..40e008190 100644
--- a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ install destop environments like GNOME or KDE).
</para><para>
-Create file systems on your partitions. For example, to create an
+Next, create file systems on the partitions. For example, to create an
ext3 file system on partition <filename>/dev/hda6</filename> (that's
our example root partition):
@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ proc /proc proc defaults 0 0
</screen></informalexample>
Use <userinput>mount -a</userinput> to mount all the file systems you
-have specified in your <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, or to mount
-file systems individually use:
+have specified in your <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, or, to mount
+file systems individually, use:
<informalexample><screen>
# mount /path # e.g.: mount /usr
diff --git a/en/appendix/preseed.xml b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
index bf3e77731..f3bf7d152 100644
--- a/en/appendix/preseed.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
@@ -805,9 +805,9 @@ d-i netcfg/wireless_wep string
<title>Mirror settings</title>
<para>
-Depending on the installation method you use, a mirror may be used both to
-download additional components of the installer, the base system and to
-set up the <filename>/etc/apt/sources.list</filename> for the installed
+Depending on the installation method you use, a mirror may be used to
+download additional components of the installer, to install the base system,
+and to set up the <filename>/etc/apt/sources.list</filename> for the installed
system.
</para><para>
@@ -846,8 +846,8 @@ d-i mirror/http/proxy string
<para>
Using preseeding to partition the harddisk is very much limited to what is
-supported by <classname>partman-auto</classname>. You can choose to either
-partition existing free space on a disk or a whole disk. The layout of the
+supported by <classname>partman-auto</classname>. You can choose to partition
+either existing free space on a disk or a whole disk. The layout of the
disk can be determined by using a predefined recipe, a custom recipe from
a recipe file or a recipe included in the preconfiguration file. It is
currently not possible to partition multiple disks using preseeding.
@@ -1142,8 +1142,8 @@ installation. The only questions asked concern the installation of the kernel.
# if no other operating system is detected on the machine.
d-i grub-installer/only_debian boolean true
-# This one makes grub-installer install to the MBR if if finds some other OS
-# too, which is less safe as it might not be able to boot that other OS.
+# This one makes grub-installer install to the MBR if it also finds some other
+# OS, which is less safe as it might not be able to boot that other OS.
d-i grub-installer/with_other_os boolean true
# Alternatively, if you want to install to a location other than the mbr,