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| author | Frans Pop <elendil@planet.nl> | 2006-12-27 03:35:13 +0000 |
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| committer | Frans Pop <elendil@planet.nl> | 2006-12-27 03:35:13 +0000 |
| commit | 8219c51318cb79b7af79e474c76a484221d3a2fe (patch) | |
| tree | a400dfc600cfef23c15cd70e605fad56d0f42652 /en/appendix | |
| parent | 3ddec740cf1d5dcfae4ad676a108f99cf1aaa3f3 (diff) | |
| download | installation-guide-8219c51318cb79b7af79e474c76a484221d3a2fe.zip | |
More corrections suggested by Clytie
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| -rw-r--r-- | en/appendix/chroot-install.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | en/appendix/preseed.xml | 14 |
2 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml index 13b782696..40e008190 100644 --- a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml +++ b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ install destop environments like GNOME or KDE). </para><para> -Create file systems on your partitions. For example, to create an +Next, create file systems on the partitions. For example, to create an ext3 file system on partition <filename>/dev/hda6</filename> (that's our example root partition): @@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ proc /proc proc defaults 0 0 </screen></informalexample> Use <userinput>mount -a</userinput> to mount all the file systems you -have specified in your <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, or to mount -file systems individually use: +have specified in your <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, or, to mount +file systems individually, use: <informalexample><screen> # mount /path # e.g.: mount /usr diff --git a/en/appendix/preseed.xml b/en/appendix/preseed.xml index bf3e77731..f3bf7d152 100644 --- a/en/appendix/preseed.xml +++ b/en/appendix/preseed.xml @@ -805,9 +805,9 @@ d-i netcfg/wireless_wep string <title>Mirror settings</title> <para> -Depending on the installation method you use, a mirror may be used both to -download additional components of the installer, the base system and to -set up the <filename>/etc/apt/sources.list</filename> for the installed +Depending on the installation method you use, a mirror may be used to +download additional components of the installer, to install the base system, +and to set up the <filename>/etc/apt/sources.list</filename> for the installed system. </para><para> @@ -846,8 +846,8 @@ d-i mirror/http/proxy string <para> Using preseeding to partition the harddisk is very much limited to what is -supported by <classname>partman-auto</classname>. You can choose to either -partition existing free space on a disk or a whole disk. The layout of the +supported by <classname>partman-auto</classname>. You can choose to partition +either existing free space on a disk or a whole disk. The layout of the disk can be determined by using a predefined recipe, a custom recipe from a recipe file or a recipe included in the preconfiguration file. It is currently not possible to partition multiple disks using preseeding. @@ -1142,8 +1142,8 @@ installation. The only questions asked concern the installation of the kernel. # if no other operating system is detected on the machine. d-i grub-installer/only_debian boolean true -# This one makes grub-installer install to the MBR if if finds some other OS -# too, which is less safe as it might not be able to boot that other OS. +# This one makes grub-installer install to the MBR if it also finds some other +# OS, which is less safe as it might not be able to boot that other OS. d-i grub-installer/with_other_os boolean true # Alternatively, if you want to install to a location other than the mbr, |