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authorFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-12-29 17:24:08 +0000
committerFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-12-29 17:24:08 +0000
commitf82a8e4c478b7fba3e646b8aea4a72d603bc799c (patch)
tree0236896788528df7bb4df3fd3caa7203bb5f7a19
parent014c80bf98813e0692e5701b0bc4bd6af0975130 (diff)
downloadinstallation-guide-f82a8e4c478b7fba3e646b8aea4a72d603bc799c.zip
Fix minor errors in recent changes spotted by Clytie, with thanks
-rw-r--r--en/appendix/chroot-install.xml6
-rw-r--r--en/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml4
-rw-r--r--en/preparing/pre-install-bios-setup.xml2
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml2
4 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
index 40e008190..14b749980 100644
--- a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
@@ -543,9 +543,9 @@ instead of <userinput>hd:</userinput>.
<title>Finishing touches</title>
<para>
-As mentioned earlier, the installed system will be very basic. If you would
-like to make the system a bit more mature, there is an easy method to
-packages of <quote>standard</quote> priority:
+As mentioned earlier, the installed system will be very basic. If you
+would like to make the system a bit more mature, there is an easy method
+to install all packages with <quote>standard</quote> priority:
<informalexample><screen>
# tasksel install standard
diff --git a/en/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml b/en/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml
index 6802ec4b9..3a7e141e4 100644
--- a/en/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml
+++ b/en/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ about the whole process, e.g. how to prepare an installation medium
and how actually to boot from that medium. Duplicating that information
here is neither possible nor necessary. However, we will describe
here which kind of Debian-specific data is needed and where to find it.
-Using both sources of information you have to prepare your machine
-and the installation medium do you can perform a boot from it.
+Using both sources of information, you have to prepare your machine
+and the installation medium before you can perform a boot from it.
When you see the welcome message in your client session, return to this
document to go through the Debian-specific installation steps.
diff --git a/en/preparing/pre-install-bios-setup.xml b/en/preparing/pre-install-bios-setup.xml
index 8b0304b26..025220a96 100644
--- a/en/preparing/pre-install-bios-setup.xml
+++ b/en/preparing/pre-install-bios-setup.xml
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ this is the case please look at <xref linkend="boot-parms"/>.
<para>
Some OldWorld Powermacs, most notably those with the <quote>control</quote>
-display driver, may not reliable produce a colormap under Linux when the
+display driver, may not reliably produce a colormap under Linux when the
display is configured for more than 256 colors. If you are experiencing such
issues with your display after rebooting (you can sometimes see data on
the monitor, but on other occasions cannot see anything) or, if the screen
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
index 5ff23875b..89c582b3d 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ mountpoint, mount options, and bootable flag; which settings are shown
depends on how the partition is to be used. If you don't like the
preselected defaults, feel free to change them to your liking. E.g. by
selecting the option <guimenuitem>Use as:</guimenuitem>, you can
-choose different filesystem for this partition including options
+choose a different filesystem for this partition, including options
to use the partition for swap, software RAID, LVM, or not
use it at all. Another nice feature is the ability to copy data from
an existing partition onto this one.