Update of original English docs

4 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/nl/using-d-i/modules/alpha/aboot-installer.xml b/nl/using-d-i/modules/alpha/aboot-installer.xml
index 2d58e0f74..ce069fd1b 100644
--- a/nl/using-d-i/modules/alpha/aboot-installer.xml
+++ b/nl/using-d-i/modules/alpha/aboot-installer.xml
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
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-<!-- original version: 25496 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 43573 untranslated -->
 
   <sect3 arch="alpha">
   <title>Install <command>aboot</command> on a Hard Disk</title>
 <para>
 
-If you have booted from SRM, if you select this option, the installer
+If you have booted from SRM and you select this option, the installer
 will write <command>aboot</command> to the first sector of the disk on
 which you installed Debian.  Be <emphasis>very</emphasis> careful &mdash; it
 is <emphasis>not</emphasis> possible to boot multiple operating
diff --git a/nl/using-d-i/modules/ia64/elilo-installer.xml b/nl/using-d-i/modules/ia64/elilo-installer.xml
index 7953befe6..3900ce064 100644
--- a/nl/using-d-i/modules/ia64/elilo-installer.xml
+++ b/nl/using-d-i/modules/ia64/elilo-installer.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-<!-- original version: 24321 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 43573 untranslated -->
 
   <sect3 arch="ia64">
   <title>Install the <command>ELILO</command> Boot Loader
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ disk partition and modifies the <guimenuitem>EFI Boot Manager</guimenuitem>
 menu in the firmware to point to the files in the EFI partition.
 The <command>elilo</command> boot loader is really in two parts.
 The <filename>/usr/sbin/elilo</filename> command manages the partition and
-copies file into it.
+copies files into it.
 The <filename>elilo.efi</filename> program is copied into the EFI
-partition and then run by the <quote>EFI Boot Manager</quote> to actually
-do the work of loading and starting the Linux kernel.
+partition and then run by the <quote>EFI Boot Manager</quote> to
+do the actual work of loading and starting the Linux kernel.
 
 </para><para>
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ filesystem with its <emphasis>boot</emphasis> flag set.
 &d-i; may show multiple choices depending on what it finds from scanning
 all of the disks of the system including EFI partitions of other system
 disks and EFI diagnostic partitions.
-Remember, the <command>elilo</command> may format the partition during
+Remember, <command>elilo</command> may format the partition during
 the installation, erasing any previous contents!
 
 </para></warning>
diff --git a/nl/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml b/nl/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
index e2f393f31..4dfece02f 100644
--- a/nl/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
+++ b/nl/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-<!-- original version: 41817 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 43576 untranslated -->
 
    <sect3 id="partman-crypto">
    <title>Configuring Encrypted Volumes</title>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ depends on your CPU speed, chosen cipher and a key length.
 To use encryption, you have to create a new partition by selecting
 some free space in the main partitioning menu. Another option is to
 choose an existing partition (e.g. a regular partition, an LVM logical
-volume or a RAID volume). In the <guimenu>Partition setting</guimenu>
+volume or a RAID volume). In the <guimenu>Partition settings</guimenu>
 menu, you need to select <guimenuitem>physical volume for
 encryption</guimenuitem> at the <menuchoice> <guimenu>Use
 as:</guimenu> </menuchoice> option. The menu will then change to
diff --git a/nl/using-d-i/modules/x86/lilo-installer.xml b/nl/using-d-i/modules/x86/lilo-installer.xml
index 42e93af59..9dd0a65d8 100644
--- a/nl/using-d-i/modules/x86/lilo-installer.xml
+++ b/nl/using-d-i/modules/x86/lilo-installer.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-<!-- original version: 43514 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 43573 untranslated -->
 
   <sect3 arch="x86">
   <title>Install the <command>LILO</command> Boot Loader
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ systems like GNU/Linux and GNU/Hurd after the installation.
 </para></note>
 <para>
 
-&d-i; presents you three choices where to install the
+&d-i; offers you three choices on where to install the
 <command>LILO</command> boot loader:
 
 <variablelist>