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authorFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2008-10-15 09:07:45 +0000
committerFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2008-10-15 09:07:45 +0000
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parent1f553ea72e9810d8cb1c523f7b39ef0b2245c060 (diff)
downloadinstallation-guide-e4b1ee9fd9ae292733390e08bd6af254b9c2a846.zip
Minor corrections; thanks to Justin B. Rye
Diffstat (limited to 'en/using-d-i/modules')
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml9
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml4
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
index c0ae399ac..9f44f053a 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@
If you have more than one harddrive<footnote><para>
-To be honest, you can construct MD device even from partitions
-residing on single physical drive, but that won't bring you anything
-useful.
+To be honest, you can construct an MD device even from partitions
+residing on single physical drive, but that won't give any benefits.
</para></footnote> in your computer, you can use
<command>mdcfg</command> to set up your drives for increased
@@ -260,8 +259,8 @@ number of active devices and the number of spare devices which will
form the MD. Next, you need to select from the list of available RAID
partitions those that will be active and then those that will be
spare. The count of selected partitions must be equal to the number
-provided few seconds ago. Don't worry. If you make a mistake and
-select a different number of partitions, the &d-i; won't let you
+provided earlier. Don't worry. If you make a mistake and
+select a different number of partitions, &d-i; won't let you
continue until you correct the issue.
</para></listitem>
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
index f4f4f77ae..6b2e9c331 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
@@ -338,12 +338,12 @@ change the file system types if the defaults do not suit you.
</para><para>
-One thing to note here are the identifiers in parentheses
+Pay attention to the identifiers in parentheses
(<replaceable>sda2_crypt</replaceable>
and <replaceable>loop0</replaceable> in this case) and the mount
points you assigned to each encrypted volume. You will need this
information later when booting the new system. The differences between
-ordinary boot process and boot process with encryption involved will
+the ordinary boot process and the boot process with encryption involved will
be covered later in <xref linkend="mount-encrypted-volumes"/>.
</para><para>