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authorFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-10-23 12:17:04 +0000
committerFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-10-23 12:17:04 +0000
commita67dba1421179cdc866770b726beb201d829f562 (patch)
tree8cb4e8346cc9d9f5e1afc4b915f0ea592d368975
parentfc6b2321aa349d7f1e0aa450a2478822fcc24c90 (diff)
downloadinstallation-guide-a67dba1421179cdc866770b726beb201d829f562.zip
Fix issues reported by Clytie Siddall
-rw-r--r--debian/changelog3
-rw-r--r--en/appendix/preseed.xml4
-rw-r--r--en/hardware/supported/i386.xml6
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index b1060d594..34b9aef10 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -54,6 +54,7 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
in preseed text file as it is still somewhat experimental.
* Document changes in guided partitioning and added encrypted LVM support.
* Disable m68k for official builds as it is not a release architecture.
+ * Minor corrections reported by Clytie Siddall. Closes: #394413, #394471.
[ Joey Hess ]
* Update for recent floppy changes.
@@ -62,7 +63,7 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
trying to write to a home directory that may not exist on the buildds.
(See #393641)
- -- Joey Hess <joeyh@debian.org> Tue, 17 Oct 2006 14:13:35 -0400
+ -- Frans Pop <fjp@debian.org> Mon, 23 Oct 2006 14:12:04 +0200
installation-guide (20060726) unstable; urgency=low
diff --git a/en/appendix/preseed.xml b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
index 2069e1a68..633f59170 100644
--- a/en/appendix/preseed.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
@@ -736,7 +736,7 @@ correct one will be selected before using preseeding.
# If the system has free space you can choose to only partition that space.
# Note: this must be preseeded with a localized (translated) value.
#d-i partman-auto/init_automatically_partition \
-# select Use the largest continuous free space
+# select Guided - use the largest continuous free space
# Alternatively, you can specify a disk to partition. The device name
# can be given in either devfs or traditional non-devfs format.
@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ d-i partman-auto/choose_recipe \
# just point at it.
#d-i partman-auto/expert_recipe_file string /hd-media/recipe
-# If not, you can put an entire recipe the preconfiguration file in one
+# If not, you can put an entire recipe into the preconfiguration file in one
# (logical) line. This example creates a small /boot partition, suitable
# swap, and uses the rest of the space for the root partition:
#d-i partman-auto/expert_recipe string \
diff --git a/en/hardware/supported/i386.xml b/en/hardware/supported/i386.xml
index 4ea95c9e3..b052f0a4e 100644
--- a/en/hardware/supported/i386.xml
+++ b/en/hardware/supported/i386.xml
@@ -16,15 +16,15 @@ This section merely outlines the basics.
Nearly all x86-based (IA-32) processors still in use in personal computers
are supported, including all varieties of Intel's "Pentium" series.
-This also includes 32-bits AMD and VIA (former Cyrix) processors, and new
+This also includes 32-bit AMD and VIA (former Cyrix) processors, and new
processors like the Athlon XP and Intel P4 Xeon.
</para>
<note><para>
-If your system has a 64-bits AMD64, Intel EM64t or Intel Core 2 Duo processor,
+If your system has a 64-bit AMD64, Intel EM64t or Intel Core 2 Duo processor,
you will probably want to use the installer for the amd64 architecture instead
-of the installer for the (32-bits) i386 architecture.
+of the installer for the (32-bit) i386 architecture.
</para></note>
<para>