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authorFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-12-27 03:58:01 +0000
committerFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2006-12-27 03:58:01 +0000
commit9d4ef14653ee2e5d098f3f1ad2d9fd2f6f4078fb (patch)
tree321cd37fc7298960454ff748f2e42828cf0ef4ea
parent6a9814d1eb673093d53bc10d98ebb4be2875e0c9 (diff)
downloadinstallation-guide-9d4ef14653ee2e5d098f3f1ad2d9fd2f6f4078fb.zip
Minor rewrite suggested by Philippe Batailler
-rw-r--r--en/appendix/preseed.xml6
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/en/appendix/preseed.xml b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
index f3bf7d152..7c1d041c6 100644
--- a/en/appendix/preseed.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
+!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
<!-- $Id$ -->
<!--
@@ -1213,8 +1213,8 @@ set of packages in some other way. We recommend always including the
If you want to install some individual packages in addition to packages
installed by tasks, you can use the parameter
<classname>pkgsel/include</classname>. The value of this parameter can be
-either comma-separated or space-separated, so you can also use it easily on
-the kernel command line.
+a list of packages separated by either commas or spaces, which allows it
+to be used easily on the kernel command line as well.
</para>