From be4b195546ac6aa3345b05cda54a164224f470ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Steve McIntyre <93sam@debian.org>
Date: Tue, 14 Apr 2015 00:11:36 +0000
Subject: Tweaks for installer boot options:

 * Move USB to the top of the list, easiest for most people
 * Split out the USB paragraph ready for inclusion for non-x86
 * Mention the slight differences between BIOS and UEFI boot menu and
   interactions (adding extra keycap entries needed)
---
 en/boot-installer/intro-cd.xml |  5 ++---
 en/boot-installer/x86.xml      | 50 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 2 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

(limited to 'en')

diff --git a/en/boot-installer/intro-cd.xml b/en/boot-installer/intro-cd.xml
index 2017ebd30..7caf6d901 100644
--- a/en/boot-installer/intro-cd.xml
+++ b/en/boot-installer/intro-cd.xml
@@ -3,9 +3,8 @@
 
 <para>
 
-The easiest route for most people will be to use a set of &debian; CDs.
-If you have a CD set, and if your machine supports booting directly off
-the CD, great!  Simply
+If you have a CD set, and if your machine supports booting directly
+off the CD, great!  Simply
 <phrase arch="x86">
 configure your system for booting off a CD as described in
 <xref linkend="boot-dev-select"/>,
diff --git a/en/boot-installer/x86.xml b/en/boot-installer/x86.xml
index 239011b48..90e64d3a4 100644
--- a/en/boot-installer/x86.xml
+++ b/en/boot-installer/x86.xml
@@ -1,6 +1,13 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
 <!-- $Id$ -->
 
+  <sect2 arch="any-x86" condition="bootable-usb" id="usb-boot">
+  <title>Booting from USB Memory Stick</title>
+
+&boot-installer-intro-usb.xml;
+
+  </sect2>
+
   <sect2 arch="any-x86"><title>Booting from a CD-ROM</title>
 
 &boot-installer-intro-cd.xml;
@@ -185,21 +192,6 @@ initrd /boot/newinstall/initrd.gz
 From here on, there should be no difference between <command>GRUB</command>
 or <command>LILO</command>.
 
-</para>
-  </sect2>
-
-  <sect2 arch="any-x86" condition="bootable-usb" id="usb-boot">
-  <title>Booting from USB Memory Stick</title>
-<para>
-
-Let's assume you have prepared everything from <xref
-linkend="boot-dev-select"/> and <xref linkend="boot-usb-files"/>.  Now
-just plug your USB stick into some free USB connector and reboot the
-computer.  The system should boot up, and unless you have used the flexible
-way to build the stick and not enabled it, you should be presented with the
-<prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt.  Here you can enter optional boot arguments, or
-just hit &enterkey;.
-
 </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -323,10 +315,20 @@ Graphical install
 Advanced options             >
 Help
 Install with speech synthesis
-
-Press ENTER to boot or TAB to edit a menu entry
 </screen></informalexample>
 
+</para>
+
+<note><para>
+
+This graphical screen will look very slightly different depending on
+how your computer has booted (BIOS or UEFI), but the same options will
+be shown.
+
+</para></note>
+
+<para>
+
 Depending on the installation method you are using, the <quote>Graphical
 install</quote> option may not be available. Bi-arch images additionally have a
 64 bit variant for each install option, right below it, thus almost doubling the
@@ -348,12 +350,14 @@ automated installs.
 
 </para><para>
 
-If you wish or need to add any boot parameters for either the installer
-or the kernel, press &tabkey;. This will display the default boot command
-for the selected menu entry and allow to add additional options. The help
-screens (see below) list some common possible options. Press &enterkey; to
-boot the installer with your options; pressing &escapekey; will return you
-to the boot menu and undo any changes you made.
+If you wish or need to add any boot parameters for either the
+installer or the kernel, press &tabkey; (BIOS boot) or &ekey; (UEFI
+boot). This will display the boot command for the selected menu entry
+and allow you to edit it to suit your needs.  The help screens (see
+below) list some common possible options. Press &enterkey; (BIOS boot)
+or &f10key; (UEFI boot) to boot the installer with your options;
+pressing &escapekey; will return you to the boot menu and undo any
+changes you made.
 
 </para><para>
 
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