From 220605bae5ff362877d558a8a7889f0fc1041049 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Frans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>
Date: Wed, 27 Dec 2006 02:20:58 +0000
Subject: Minor corrections and some rewrites based on suggestions from Clytie
 Siddall

---
 en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml | 17 ++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml')

diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml
index e9327eb43..4ba5139d8 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/base-installer.xml
@@ -1,24 +1,20 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
 <!-- $Id$ -->
 
-   <sect3 id="base-installer">
-   <title>Base System Installation</title>
-
 <para>
 
-During the Base installation, package unpacking and setup messages are
-redirected to <userinput>tty4</userinput>.  You can access this
-terminal by pressing
+During installation of the base system, package unpacking and setup
+messages are redirected to <userinput>tty4</userinput>.
+You can access this terminal by pressing
 <keycombo><keycap>Left Alt</keycap><keycap>F4</keycap></keycombo>;
 get back to the main installer process with
 <keycombo><keycap>Left Alt</keycap><keycap>F1</keycap></keycombo>.
 
-
 </para><para>
 
-The unpack/setup messages generated by the base installation are saved in
-<filename>/var/log/syslog</filename> when the installation is
-performed over a serial console.
+The unpack/setup messages generated during this phase are also saved in
+<filename>/var/log/syslog</filename>. You can check them there if the
+installation is performed over a serial console.
 
 </para><para>
 
@@ -28,4 +24,3 @@ hardware. In lower priority modes, you will be able to choose from a list
 of available kernels.
 
 </para>
-   </sect3>
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