From 521496e205bd1ea56b8404a8c7669d690a6fb809 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Frans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>
Date: Wed, 27 Dec 2006 03:56:26 +0000
Subject: Minor rewrite suggested by Philippe Batailler

---
 en/appendix/preseed.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'en/appendix')

diff --git a/en/appendix/preseed.xml b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
index f3bf7d152..7c1d041c6 100644
--- a/en/appendix/preseed.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/preseed.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
+!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
 <!-- $Id$ -->
 
 <!--
@@ -1213,8 +1213,8 @@ set of packages in some other way. We recommend always including the
 If you want to install some individual packages in addition to packages
 installed by tasks, you can use the parameter
 <classname>pkgsel/include</classname>. The value of this parameter can be
-either comma-separated or space-separated, so you can also use it easily on
-the kernel command line.
+a list of packages separated by either commas or spaces, which allows it
+to be used easily on the kernel command line as well.
 
 </para>
 
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