From 1f380d96c9262f651b6c53f0c390b2d696adb70e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Frans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>
Date: Sun, 30 Jul 2006 14:38:19 +0000
Subject: - Various corrections suggested by Clytie Siddall. - Update
 instructions on how to set module parameters for PLIP installation. - Update
 chroot install instructions to use aptitude instead of apt-get.

---
 en/appendix/chroot-install.xml | 21 +++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'en/appendix/chroot-install.xml')

diff --git a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
index aa15b8dc4..aacc62271 100644
--- a/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
+++ b/en/appendix/chroot-install.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ or at least 300MB if you plan to install X.
 
 </para><para>
 
-To create file systems on your partitions. For example, to create an
+Create file systems on your partitions. For example, to create an
 ext3 file system on partition <filename>/dev/hda6</filename> (that's
 our example root partition):
 
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ manually before proceding with the next stage.
   <title>Install <command>debootstrap</command></title>
 <para>
 
-The tool that the Debian installer uses, which is recognized as the
+The utility used by the Debian installer, and recognized as the
 official way to install a Debian base system, is
 <command>debootstrap</command>. It uses <command>wget</command> and
 <command>ar</command>, but otherwise depends only on
@@ -357,15 +357,16 @@ interface name (eth0, eth1, etc.) that you expect.
 <para>
 
 To configure your locale settings to use a language other than
-English, install the locales support package and configure it:
+English, install the <classname>locales</classname> support package
+and configure it:
 
 <informalexample><screen>
-# apt-get install locales
+# aptitude install locales
 # dpkg-reconfigure locales
 </screen></informalexample>
 
-NOTE: Apt must be configured beforehand by creating a sources.list and
-running apt-get update.
+NOTE: <classname>apt</classname> must be configured beforehand by creating
+a sources.list and running <command>aptitude update</command>.
 Before using locales with character sets other than ASCII or latin1,
 please consult the appropriate localization HOWTO.
 
@@ -387,7 +388,7 @@ and a boot loader. Identify available pre-packaged kernels with
 Then install your choice using its package name.
 
 <informalexample><screen>
-# apt-get install <phrase condition="classic-kpkg">kernel</phrase><phrase condition="common-kpkg">linux</phrase>-image-<replaceable>&kernelversion;-arch-etc</replaceable>
+# aptitude install <phrase condition="classic-kpkg">kernel</phrase><phrase condition="common-kpkg">linux</phrase>-image-<replaceable>&kernelversion;-arch-etc</replaceable>
 </screen></informalexample>
 
 </para>
@@ -398,9 +399,9 @@ Then install your choice using its package name.
 <para>
 
 To make your &debian; system bootable, set up your boot loader to load
-the installed kernel with your new root partition. Note that debootstrap
-does not install a boot loader, though you can use apt-get inside your
-Debian chroot to do so.
+the installed kernel with your new root partition. Note that
+<command>debootstrap</command> does not install a boot loader, though you
+can use <command>aptitude</command> inside your Debian chroot to do so.
 
 </para><para arch="i386">
 
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