From b9a1f6b159c52da5b097ea4ecb88e16087f0d71a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Wansing Date: Wed, 6 May 2015 20:43:47 +0000 Subject: Some minor fixes (add some missing fullstops; use for quotes; make link clickable) --- en/boot-installer/arm.xml | 10 +++++----- en/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml | 5 +++-- 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/boot-installer/arm.xml b/en/boot-installer/arm.xml index 496c19f08..784995dac 100644 --- a/en/boot-installer/arm.xml +++ b/en/boot-installer/arm.xml @@ -56,15 +56,15 @@ for jessie so the serial console is used. The console device should be detected automatically from the firmware, but if it is not then after you boot linux from the GRUB menu you will see a - 'Booting Linux' message then nothing more. + Booting Linux message, then nothing more. If you hit this issue you will need to set a specific console config on the kernel command line. Hit e - for 'Edit Kernel command-line' at the GRUB menu, and change + for Edit Kernel command-line at the GRUB menu, and change --- quiet to console=<device>,<speed> - e.g. console=ttyAMA0,115200n8 + e.g. console=ttyAMA0,115200n8. When finished hit Control x to continue booting with new setting. @@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ Run a serial console at 115200, 8bit no parity, and boot the - machine. Reboot the machine and when you see "Hit any key to - stop autoboot:" hit a key to get a Mustang# prompt. Then use + machine. Reboot the machine and when you see Hit any key to + stop autoboot: hit a key to get a Mustang# prompt. Then use U-Boot commands to load and boot the kernel, dtb and initrd. diff --git a/en/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml b/en/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml index a3824d046..ba153e7fb 100644 --- a/en/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml +++ b/en/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ installed to nvram. This is an excerpt from -IBM PowerKVM on IBM POWER8 +IBM PowerKVM on IBM POWER8. @@ -179,7 +179,8 @@ Like so: SLOF can also be installed into rpm-based distribution systems, given the proper repository or rpm package. Additionally, the upstream source -code is available at http://github.com/leilihh/SLOF. +code is available at +. -- cgit v1.2.3