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authorFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2007-01-07 20:00:41 +0000
committerFrans Pop <elendil@planet.nl>2007-01-07 20:00:41 +0000
commit2b76bf4ab9cc87d82653346fd8cfada3b95a890d (patch)
tree10c061cb5edb0b48bf3fcf1e95012760290d5f1c /en
parentfff305aef9285f83ea1ab0045064dd8b72798de2 (diff)
downloadinstallation-guide-2b76bf4ab9cc87d82653346fd8cfada3b95a890d.zip
Last set minor errors spotted by Christian, just in time for the hard freeze
Diffstat (limited to 'en')
-rw-r--r--en/boot-installer/trouble.xml6
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml6
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/netcfg.xml6
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml2
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml4
-rw-r--r--en/using-d-i/using-d-i.xml2
6 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/en/boot-installer/trouble.xml b/en/boot-installer/trouble.xml
index dab5afa4a..61d76765f 100644
--- a/en/boot-installer/trouble.xml
+++ b/en/boot-installer/trouble.xml
@@ -326,8 +326,8 @@ eg. pure white, pure black or colored pixel garbage, your system may
contain a problematic video card which does not switch to the
framebuffer mode properly. Then you can use the boot parameter
<userinput>fb=false video=vga16:off</userinput> to disable the framebuffer
-console. Only the English
-language will be available during the installation due to limited
+console. Only a reduced set of
+languages will be available during the installation due to limited
console features. See <xref linkend="boot-parms"/> for details.
</para>
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ It lets you store system error logs and configuration information from the
installer to a floppy, or download them using a web browser.
This information may provide clues as to what went wrong and how to
-fix it. If you are submitting a bug report you may want to attach
+fix it. If you are submitting a bug report, you may want to attach
this information to the bug report.
</para><para>
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
index 710c38845..f1c57be34 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/mdcfg.xml
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ continue until you correct the issue.
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
-RAID5 has similar setup procedure as RAID1 with the exception that you
+RAID5 has a similar setup procedure as RAID1 with the exception that you
need to use at least <emphasis>three</emphasis> active partitions.
</para></listitem>
@@ -207,8 +207,8 @@ need to use at least <emphasis>three</emphasis> active partitions.
<para>
It is perfectly possible to have several types of MD at once. For
-example if you have three 200 GB hard drives dedicated to MD, each
-containing two 100 GB partitions, you can combine first partitions on
+example, if you have three 200 GB hard drives dedicated to MD, each
+containing two 100 GB partitions, you can combine the first partitions on
all three disks into the RAID0 (fast 300 GB video editing partition)
and use the other three partitions (2 active and 1 spare) for RAID1
(quite reliable 100 GB partition for <filename>/home</filename>).
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/netcfg.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/netcfg.xml
index cfa87797d..daf4f4b03 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/netcfg.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/netcfg.xml
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ By default, &d-i; tries to configure your computer's network
automatically via DHCP. If the DHCP probe succeeds, you are done. If the
probe fails, it may be caused by many factors ranging from unplugged
network cable, to a misconfigured DHCP setup. Or maybe you don't have
-a DHCP server in your local network at all. For further explanation
-check the error messages on the third console. In any case, you will
-be asked if you want to retry, or if you want to perform manual
+a DHCP server in your local network at all. For further explanation,
+check the error messages on the fourth console. In any case, you will
+be asked if you want to retry, or if you want to perform a manual
setup. DHCP servers are sometimes really slow in their responses, so
if you are sure everything is in place, try again.
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
index 75c5bd863..028f4e2f3 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman-crypto.xml
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ the process).
<term>Random key</term>
<listitem><para>
-Please see the the section on random keys above.
+Please see the section on random keys above.
</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
index 89c582b3d..aa33f9c9b 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/modules/partman.xml
@@ -250,9 +250,9 @@ return to <command>partman</command>'s main screen.
If you decide you want to change something about your partition,
simply select the partition, which will bring you to the partition
-configuration menu. This is the same screen like when creating
+configuration menu. This is the same screen as is used when creating
a new partition, so you can change the same settings. One thing
-which might not be very obvious at a first glance is that you can
+that may not be very obvious at a first glance is that you can
resize the partition by selecting the item displaying the size of the
partition. Filesystems known to work are at least fat16, fat32, ext2,
ext3 and swap. This menu also allows you to delete a partition.
diff --git a/en/using-d-i/using-d-i.xml b/en/using-d-i/using-d-i.xml
index 0ae8e0d8f..947391048 100644
--- a/en/using-d-i/using-d-i.xml
+++ b/en/using-d-i/using-d-i.xml
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ the source of his installation packages.
<term>cdrom-checker</term><listitem><para>
-Checks integrity of a CD-ROM. This way the user may assure him/herself
+Checks integrity of a CD-ROM. This way, the user may assure him/herself
that the installation CD-ROM was not corrupted.
</para></listitem>