Various corrections suggested by Clytie Siddall (and one by Jens Seidel)

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/en/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml b/en/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml
index 6b222a142..e0dfe0bbf 100644
--- a/en/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml
+++ b/en/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ OpenBoot provides the basic functions needed to boot the &arch-title;
 architecture.  This is rather similar in function to the BIOS in the
 x86 architecture, although much nicer.  The Sun boot PROMs have a
 built-in forth interpreter which lets you do quite a number of things
-with your machine, such as diagnostics, simple scripts, etc.
+with your machine, such as diagnostics and simple scripts.
 
 </para><para>
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ emulator if you are using a different program.
 
 You can use OpenBoot to boot from specific devices, and also to change
 your default boot device.  However, you need to know some details
-about how OpenBoot names devices; it's much different from Linux
+about how OpenBoot names devices; it's considerably different from Linux
 device naming, described in <xref linkend="device-names"/>.
 Also, the command will vary a bit, depending on what version of
 OpenBoot you have.  More information about OpenBoot can be found in
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ the <ulink url="&url-openboot;">Sun OpenBoot Reference</ulink>.
 
 </para><para>
 
-Typically, with newer revisions, you can use OpenBoot device such as
+Typically, with newer revisions, you can use OpenBoot devices such as
 <quote>floppy</quote>, <quote>cdrom</quote>, <quote>net</quote>,
 <quote>disk</quote>, or <quote>disk2</quote>.  These have the obvious
 meanings; the <quote>net</quote> device is for booting from the network.