Minor corrections and some rewrites based on suggestions from Clytie Siddall

1 files changed, 19 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index f800264c7..a24f0f727 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
   * Correct error for alpha netboot installations. Thanks to Aurélien Géröme.
     Closes: #386591.
   * Correct number of release arches. Thanks to Holger Wansing. Closes: #384321.
-  * Minor corrections reported by Malcolm Parsons. Closes: #388138.
+  * Minor corrections suggested by Malcolm Parsons. Closes: #388138.
   * Document new boot parameters theme and directfb/hw-accel.
   * Remove now obsolete distinction between classic and common kpkg.
   * Update all arches to kernel version 2.6.17.
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
   * Document changes in guided partitioning and added encrypted LVM support.
   * Disable m68k for official builds as it is not a release architecture.
   * buildweb.sh: use 'mv -f' to avoid errors during builds on the webserver.
-  * Minor corrections reported by Clytie Siddall. Closes: #394413, #394471.
+  * Minor corrections suggested by Clytie Siddall. Closes: #394413, #394471.
   * Update task sizes as per D-I RC1.
   * New troubleshooting section on how to deal with CD-ROM related problems.
   * Document how to pass parameters to kernel modules on boot.
@@ -97,25 +97,17 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
 
   [ Frans Pop ]
   * Update all arches to kernel version 2.6.18.
-  * boot-new:
-    - Remove reference to apt guide (not installed by default) and obsolete
-      debian-guide. Thanks, Philippe Batailler. Closes: #402492.
-    - As lynx is no longer installed, suggest w3m as text based browser.
-    - Explain how to browse /usr/share/doc/ using a graphical web browser.
-    - Mention documentation packages.
-    - Clarify what happens on first boot and how to get help to in case of
-      problems.
+  * hardware:
+    - Remove ancient section on parity RAM. Closes: #403035.
+    - Update documenation for Sparc, based on patch by Jurij Smakov.
+      Closes: #389516.
+    - PowerPC/APUS is currently not supported; removed from hardware table.
   * boot-installer/parameters:
     - Document anna/choose_modules boot parameter.
   * boot-installer/trouble:
     - Fix reference to Save debug logs menu option.
       Thanks, Philippe Batailler. Closes: #402439.
     - Add a note that installation reports will be published.
-  * hardware:
-    - Remove ancient section on parity RAM. Closes: #403035.
-    - Update documenation for Sparc, based on patch by Jurij Smakov.
-      Closes: #389516.
-    - PowerPC/APUS is currently not supported; removed from hardware table.
   * install-methods:
     - All architectures that support TFTP booting also support DCHP, so remove
       the "supports-dhcp" condition.
@@ -123,6 +115,17 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
     - Use dhcp3-server for examples rather than dhcp (version 2).
     - tftpd-hpa does not use /tftpboot by default; allow for this in examples.
       Closes: #342076.
+  * using-d-i:
+    - Minor corrections and some rewrites based on suggestions from
+      Clytie Siddall. Closes: #367861.
+  * boot-new:
+    - Remove reference to apt guide (not installed by default) and obsolete
+      debian-guide. Thanks, Philippe Batailler. Closes: #402492.
+    - As lynx is no longer installed, suggest w3m as text based browser.
+    - Explain how to browse /usr/share/doc/ using a graphical web browser.
+    - Mention documentation packages.
+    - Clarify what happens on first boot and how to get help to in case of
+      problems.
   * post-install:
     - Remove section on reactivating Windows; the installer should detect it
       automatically after all. Closes: #402437.
@@ -132,7 +135,7 @@ installation-guide (2006xxxx) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
   * appendix/chroot-install:
     - Changes suggested in review by Wiktor Wandachowicz. Closes: #394929.
 
- -- Frans Pop <fjp@debian.org>  Tue, 26 Dec 2006 22:46:28 +0100
+ -- Frans Pop <fjp@debian.org>  Wed, 27 Dec 2006 03:08:09 +0100
 
 installation-guide (20060726) unstable; urgency=low